Today in Pod 6 we were learning to describe the setting of this video using adjectives and similes.
An adjective is a descriptive word and a simile is when you compare one thing to another using like or as.
An adjective is a descriptive word and a simile is when you compare one thing to another using like or as.
The clouds are fluffy like cotton wool. The clouds are like candy floss. The clouds are fluffy like blankets. Cornelius
The clouds were as soft as marshmallows and as fluffy as pillows. The sky was beautiful like a pink and purple rainbow. Gus was as grey as stone. Ella
The clouds are as fluffy as marshmallows. The sky is pink and purple. The clouds were fluffy like cotton wool. Persia
The clouds were like candy floss floating in the air. The clouds are like a pillow with feathers falling out travelling through the sky. The clouds are as fluffy as marshmallows squishing down on neighbouring clouds. Lucy
The clouds were squishy like marshmallows and soft like cotton wool. The clouds were crafty like wizards. The sky was like coloured candy floss twisted together. Xavier
The clouds are as soft as marshmallow pillows and fluffy like a blanket. They are soft like a cat and fluffy like candy floss. Kredence
The bags were squishy like marshmallows. The clouds were as fluffy as cotton wool. The sky was as beautiful as a rainbow. Keeley
The clouds are bouncy like marshmallows springing up into the sky. The clouds are lumpy like sheep wool. The clouds are fluffy like cotton candy. Shana
The clouds were as light as a feather. They were fluffy like cotton wool. They are soft like marshmallow. Callum
The clouds were like pillows floating across the sky. The clouds looked as fluffy as candy floss breaking into pieces and bobbing up and down in the sky. Piper
The clouds were squishy like cotton candy. The clouds were lumpy like marshmallow clumps and as fluffy as pillows. Jack
The clouds are fluffy like marshmallows. They are soft like pillows. The clouds are white like wool. Lexi
The clouds are fluffy like candy floss. They are soft like a cushion. Kyzah-Lee
The clouds were squishy marshmallows they bounce down and back up like springs and bouncy balls. They are like squishy candy floss. Nina
The clouds are squishy like cotton wool. They are fluffy and soft like candy floss. The clouds are like fluffy pillows. Daniel
The clouds are big bouncy fluffy pillows. The clouds are like squishy marshmallows. The clouds are as soft as silk. Savanna
The clouds are as fluffy as cotton candy and soft like sheep wool. Chase
I feel like I need to go and lie on a cloud now - they sound so soft and fluffy and I could have something to eat at the same time :)
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ReplyDeleteI like the way you said the sky is pink and purple. I like the way you said the clouds are as fluffy as marshmallows.
Next time more sentences and describing words would be good so that your writing is longer. I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
From Lexi
To Kyzah-Lee that was great work. I Loved the part in your story where you said they look like pillows.You made me think that they were pillows. Next time you could make it longer because I loved the start.
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To Tiffany. I liked your writing about the road safety walk. I liike how you knew how to spell Constable. Next time you could make it more interesting by adding more adjectives. I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
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To KeeIey. That is great writing I Iike the way that you described the cIouds as squishy and I loved the way you said cotton wool. Next time you should add some more writing. From Jack
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