Thursday, 16 June 2016

Finding Jesse By Chase




Once upon a time Bob was walking in the forest. He found a robot he asked the robot "can you direct me to Jesse's home?" The robot told him where Jesses home was but all he ended up finding was a dragon cave. Luckily the dragon wasn't home. He went back to find the robot again and shouted "you were wrong!" " HA HA HA I tricked you" laughed the robot now I am off to cut firewood. So Bob went on he found a snowman Bob said "can you direct me to Jesses' home?" The snowman replied "ah yes, down the road to the left" "Thank you mister snowman" said Bob and he went down the road to the left. He finally founds Jesses home. KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK, he waited for Jesse to open the door. 


5 comments:

  1. That is a cool story, Chase! I love how the robot went off to cut firewood. There were lots of things happening in your story and now I want to find out what happens next! Well done.

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  2. Wow, what an excellent story Chase, you have a great imagination! I like your drawing of all the characters and the name of the robot "Big D".

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  3. Thanks for commenting on the blog . Haha I called it Big D cause it is like you. From Chase

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  4. Chase I think that is a great story. I think the robot is a bit like you because you like to trick people sometimes.��(Ajji)

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  5. Thanks for commenting on the blog . Haha I called it Big D cause it is like you. From Chase

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