Shining feircly on the dinosaurs the sun starts to burn. Swish, swish, swish! Thwack, thwack, thwack! Shudder, shudder, shudder! Near the sludgy old swamp the dinosaurs are dancing getting ready to romp. As the sun starts to drop the dinos start to sleep the only sound heard in the creak is dinos snoring till the morning starts to peek.
Friday, 2 September 2016
Dinosaur Dancing By Piper
Shining feircly on the dinosaurs the sun starts to burn. Swish, swish, swish! Thwack, thwack, thwack! Shudder, shudder, shudder! Near the sludgy old swamp the dinosaurs are dancing getting ready to romp. As the sun starts to drop the dinos start to sleep the only sound heard in the creak is dinos snoring till the morning starts to peek.
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You made it very descriptive and it suited the goal. I liked it and I would like to see more.
ReplyDeleteWOW! You make me feel like i am there with the snoring dinosaurs
ReplyDeleteThe writing is awesome it painted a picture in my head
ReplyDeletethat is a really good story I think that you have made it better by putting the thwack and shudder it was a really good story!!!
ReplyDeletethat is a really good story I think that you have made it better by putting the thwack and shudder it was a really good story!!!
ReplyDeletewow that looks fantastic
ReplyDeleteWow Piper! that was very cool i like how it rhymed!
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