The brave lizard staring at the hot African sun. His tired legs sunk into the soft sand. He stands searching for water. He notices something twinkling in the distance, he staggers towards it hoping it was not a hallucinaton.
Hello Chase - I love this piece of writing. The words you chose to use were perfect! They made a really clear picture in my mind of what the lizard was doing. I look forward to reading some more of your writing.
Excellent work Chase, those are very descriptive words!
ReplyDeleteHello Chase - I love this piece of writing. The words you chose to use were perfect! They made a really clear picture in my mind of what the lizard was doing. I look forward to reading some more of your writing.
ReplyDeleteI love this story Chase! I'm glad the lizard is going to get a drink. I can imagine how hot he is.
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