WALT: Begin our narrative with a verb.
I know I am successful when:
I have used a verb to begin my sentence.
Hanging from the dandelion Amya began to sway. As she saw the grass sink to the bottom of the earth. They got higher and higher guided by the sun. Suddenly they started falling and falling. Woooosh! She caught grip of the dandelion. She started to fly again.
Piper
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