Friday, 19 August 2016

Ella's Writing


WALT: Begin our narrative with a verb. 

I know I am successful when:
I have used a verb to begin my sentence.





Gliding through the sky higher and higher Taylor started to get scared. Starting to fly down Taylor landed with a thump. Taylor was scared. She did not know where she was. "Help me!" she shouted. But no one was there. She started to walk. She found an old tent and an apple tree beside it. Night fell.  She slept on a cushion and dreamed of going home. The next morning her family came to rescue her "yay" she shouted. 

Ella

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